AMG I FOUND A CRITIQUE BUTTON~ I know it's cuz you put it there lD
Well I know that you said that you already know that the sun doesn't produce that much glare in eyes, but I have to say it anyway. The sun doesn't produce that much glare onto eyes.
Under the eye, I think I'm seeing a tear. Is that what I'm seeing? I can't say for sure, because it's gray and had red/pink stripes.
Hmm.. While the shading is quite well done, I do notice a couple flaws. On the back fins, there seems to be not enough shading, and after the first tube (on part of the body), I notice on the back (on the yellow) that you snuck in a bit of erasing in there. While I am sure it was intentional, I'm also sure it is incorrect. But I could be wrong. I see other shading mistakes, like on the tail fin, on the secondtube fins, on the earthingies, on the arm(s), on the neck. But I am just too lazy to spell out exactly what they are for yeh~
Now, I also find myself looking at dem clouds. I can't say exactly how they're supposed to be like at this perspective, as I do not really know myself, but I'm not entirely sure that that's it. Don't mind that comment if I am wrong.
But in all honesty I can hardly peel my eyes away from this picture. It's so beautiful, even though there are mistakes. Everybody makes mistakes.
The eye glare is part of the cartoony style~
It's a teensey blush.
okayyyy how do I explain thiss...
so her body isn't quite covering her completely so some sun reaches her back fins c: I kinda have the same reason for everything else xD I'm the only artist I know who has a Rayquaza oc who is drawn constantly so I created my own anatomy for her and that's my reason for my pecuiliar shading XP ALL the fins are uhhowdoyousayit.. boxed..? /shot but that's where theres that thing. Clouds, from what I know, curve around like that when you look at them in a certain way. I dont like them though Thankies pro~
I kind of think you need a new nickname, pro sounds too adulty e.e
Isee. But it still bothers me lD
It still bothers me. But your reply does make sense.
I seem to see clouds drawn that way in this perspective, so it could be correct. As I said before, I don't really know.
lol, if you must give me another name, feel free. I don't mind O:
nothing don't mind meeeeeee